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Friday, 22 September 2017

The piano

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man's paint of view as he recalls his memories.
The piano
By Kaylee

It was an normal day and I was just out the back eating some piano cookies my wife made them because she knew how much I love piano’s. Next week I’m going to perform in front of 600 people. It is the week and my wife is getting really sick every day she gets worse and worse and she gets sicker and sicker. Okay it’s the night I perform in front of 600 people I got my coat and yelled out to my wife and there was no answer I yelled out to her again still no answer. So I went up to check on her and when I got up to her I found her on the bed and I said hey wake up it’s time to go I’m going to be late still no answer I shook the bed she always gets up. I knew that the only thing was that she had died.I whispered in her ear I’ll be back.So I put a photo of  her in the passenger seat.

I’m at the big performance and now I wish she still was alive because I've alway had here by my side.Instead of the music I was going to play I’m going to play sad music here I go.

I’m in the second verse of my music everybody's grabbing tissues because it was really sad music the judge's where crying and grabbing tissues and at the third  verse I start to remember sad sad memory.Like when I went to war me and my friend was shot and when my dad gave me his toy horse and then I start to remember about my wife.It felt like she was right next to me.I planed that my grandson will come and finish it all off because my wife was not here any more so he finished all off.People cheered and  cheered until they couldn't cheer and cheer any more I start to make piano cookie my wife use to make.

Now it was time to get ready for bed and have dinner.For dinner I had takeaways what else would I eat my wife was the cooker in this house I will start to cook when I get a cookbook.So I order McDonalds and KFC and Burger King just every takeaways I was pig so that will explain all the takeaways and my wife makes me 4 whole steak for dinner.(1 month later.)So now I am 97 and I’m getting really sick even sicker than my wife so I think I have 1 week left that's what my doctor said and he may be right.So now it’s time for my bedtime my doctor said if you want to live for 2 weeks so I go to bed at 4 o’clock for 1 week.(1 week later) so I have 1 week left and I’m going to make the most of it so I’ll spend time with family and friends.So now I have 2 more day then I die I’m in the hospital with all kinds of medicine so now I have to go to sleep and then I will have 1 more day left.So when I go to sleep tonight I will die so I’m going to face time all my friends and family it’s the night I’m going to die in my sleep and go find my wife.

Now I’m up in the sky in heaven and now I’m going to look at a house that I could live in with my wife.I find a house with my wife name on it so I move in with her and I just realised I still had McDonalds on my sleeve.So I put the burger on a plate cut in half wait for her on the table.This how my wife died she was getting old and that’s the same way I died.She just got home from the heaven mall I wonder if hell mall is called hell mall.Oh yeah I just realised I had her wedding ring in my pocket and my wedding ring on my hand.I said hi to her she said hi back I said I have a present for you and she said thank you she said where is it I said in the kitchen.

Her it is it’s a burger you loved them.So I’m going to check out the place I found the master heaven he had a piano in front of him I said can I play on it he said yes.I said thank you thank you thank you he said no problem I played and he heard he thought it was lovely music and he will make me the new heaven master.Because of my music.After a couple of days me and my wife made up some rule some nice and easy rules.So that the end of my story of my life.

Te Ngahere

                       
WALT about te ngahere the rakau the kararehe the manu and the ricks to the forest.

Thursday, 24 August 2017

The mudslide in Sierra leone

Week#45



World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.


Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:
… as it came rushing towards us we…

The mudslide in Sierra leone

I was in my house just doing my normal thing when I was about to get my breakfast. I heard a noise from the top of the hill. I heard people screaming from outside. I went outside and I saw mud everywhere. I saw people suffocating in the mud. I was afraid that the mud was going to get in my nice and cozy home but the mud didn’t get in my cozy home. I just remembered that I had left my shiny, expensive car outside. I wanted to go out but I found a dead body on my step.

Friday, 18 August 2017

The magician


The magician

Hello my name is the magician. I do magic across the county. I have a good of magic show. I am a magician with an evil laugh  I am as wicked as a witch.

I am going to a magic competitions. It is  windy as a storm. I wear my best top hat my best coat and my best white t-shirt.  There were things floating in the air so that’s how I it was the competitions.After I was in the building. I sweat magic gorily because I was in the most popular competitions places you can do magic.

I was a bit scared of losing  because that would make my collection of  medals and I will have less of metals  


I have won every magic show I have been too.I have been to the fabulous magic show and the competition.

It was the big day it was the competition and many more.But this one was the weirdest one I have been to.

There was a pram in the air, a umbrella in the air, and much more in the air than you could imagine. I was just in time for my turn on the stage so I was nervous and stressed.I said to myself “I can do this and I won't give up”.

I was stressed and happy. The crowd was cheering for us “hip hip hura”. I was next on stage I was a bit nervous and happy the the person how call your name to go on stage he called my name. I felt like running but I said no to myself “no”.

What a great show I came first place. I was really excited that I  came first place because I  have never got 2nd place of 3rd place . It was the most beautiful thing ever because it was the most popular magic place ever.

Thursday, 3 August 2017

Create your own Kayak WATL to create our own kayak that people mite buy in the future.

Create your own Kayak
Instructions

Step 1
Create your design
*Screenshot the finished image
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Step 2
Describe your design
I.e. “I have chosen a blue Slalom K1 kayak with a blue base and a red outline. I have chosen to place 5 yellow stars at the front of my kayak and a large triangle at the back.”
(My Kayak design)I choose this design because I was trying to make it simple.It’s a two person kayak.


Step 3
Describe who would buy your design
I.e. “I believe this kayak would be liked by teachers who want to get into kayaking. The paintjob is simple, but still pretty cool looking.”
A person that who like simple stuff on there kayak.They could use it on a river.


Step 4
Share your screenshot and your descriptions on your blog.
With a Walt and Task description.
I.e.

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Monday, 3 July 2017

Interland

WALT be cyber smart using a game called Interland. In this game there are 4 different cyber worlds each focussing on a different part of cyber smart. The green mountain which is the one we started with is about being kind and caring. I got to the top of this mountain and scored 285 see my screenshot below.
Then I decided to have a go at the Tower of treasure as which is about going around a Tower.

I liked using a game for our cyber smart learning about cyber smart by using this game.










Tuesday, 27 June 2017

WALT estimate and measure to the nearest centimeter.I liked that we had to get a ruler and measure our feet,our arms,a chair and our shoe.