The piano

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man's paint of view as he recalls his memories.

The piano

By Kaylee

It was an normal day and I was just out the back eating some piano cookies my wife made them because she knew how much I love piano’s. Next week I’m going to perform in front of 600 people. It is the week and my wife is getting really sick every day she gets worse and worse and she gets sicker and sicker. Okay it’s the night I perform in front of 600 people I got my coat and yelled out to my wife and there was no answer I yelled out to her again still no answer. So I went up to check on her and when I got up to her I found her on the bed and I said hey wake up it’s time to go I’m going to be late still no answer I shook the bed she always gets up. I knew that the only thing was that she had died.I whispered in her ear I’ll be back.So I put a photo of  her in the passenger seat.

I’m at the big performance and now I wish she still was alive because I've alway had here by my side.Instead of the music I was going to play I’m going to play sad music here I go.

I’m in the second verse of my music everybody's grabbing tissues because it was really sad music the judge's where crying and grabbing tissues and at the third  verse I start to remember sad sad memory.Like when I went to war me and my friend was shot and when my dad gave me his toy horse and then I start to remember about my wife.It felt like she was right next to me.I planed that my grandson will come and finish it all off because my wife was not here any more so he finished all off.People cheered and  cheered until they couldn't cheer and cheer any more I start to make piano cookie my wife use to make.

Now it was time to get ready for bed and have dinner.For dinner I had takeaways what else would I eat my wife was the cooker in this house I will start to cook when I get a cookbook.So I order McDonalds and KFC and Burger King just every takeaways I was pig so that will explain all the takeaways and my wife makes me 4 whole steak for dinner.(1 month later.)So now I am 97 and I’m getting really sick even sicker than my wife so I think I have 1 week left that's what my doctor said and he may be right.So now it’s time for my bedtime my doctor said if you want to live for 2 weeks so I go to bed at 4 o’clock for 1 week.(1 week later) so I have 1 week left and I’m going to make the most of it so I’ll spend time with family and friends.So now I have 2 more day then I die I’m in the hospital with all kinds of medicine so now I have to go to sleep and then I will have 1 more day left.So when I go to sleep tonight I will die so I’m going to face time all my friends and family it’s the night I’m going to die in my sleep and go find my wife.

Now I’m up in the sky in heaven and now I’m going to look at a house that I could live in with my wife.I find a house with my wife name on it so I move in with her and I just realised I still had McDonalds on my sleeve.So I put the burger on a plate cut in half wait for her on the table.This how my wife died she was getting old and that’s the same way I died.She just got home from the heaven mall I wonder if hell mall is called hell mall.Oh yeah I just realised I had her wedding ring in my pocket and my wedding ring on my hand.I said hi to her she said hi back I said I have a present for you and she said thank you she said where is it I said in the kitchen.

Her it is it’s a burger you loved them.So I’m going to check out the place I found the master heaven he had a piano in front of him I said can I play on it he said yes.I said thank you thank you thank you he said no problem I played and he heard he thought it was lovely music and he will make me the new heaven master.Because of my music.After a couple of days me and my wife made up some rule some nice and easy rules.So that the end of my story of my life.